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The third of free art (please don't ask where, I'm not accepting more characters)

This is Laone and she belongs to *Chouko92! She hit the nail home with a strong female character and little known fact that I'm dying to learn to design some armors!
The picture itself took way longer than it should have but I hope you like it anyhoo ;u;
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Oh my goodness. Stunning. You get lost in the color... its just wonderful. There's so much detail. I can hardly stand not to give you millions of stars. I love it.

Some things that may need work:

Maybe you should work on her stance so her facial features could stand out more. I think the impact you could make with more of the "chin high" stance would be astounding.

All in all. I'm more than impressed. After this, I'm anxious to see more of your work. It's really great. Keep it up. (Love the fact that you used a female too!)
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Mone vetää herneensä nenään, jos en kirjoita englanniksi, mutta palaute ei ole suunnattu heille ja haluan, että tekijä ymmärtää mitä yritän kertoa. Enkun sanojen käyttäminen on tällä hetkellä hyvin kömpelöä ja en halua väärinkäsityksiä tekstistäni.

Mutta asiaan! Tämä edustalle asetettu oikea jalka näyttää nyt hiukan muusta kehosta irralliselta tai hivenen ylisuurelta. Ymmärrän tekijän ajatelleen asentoa perspektiivin kannalta, mutta omaan silmääni se töksähtää virheenä. Mutta myös takimmainen vasen jalka näyttää irtonaiselta takamukseen verrattaessa. Jos hahmon muu keho olisi hivenen isompi ja lähempänä miekkaa, asento olisi ehkä tasapainoisempi ja perspektiivikin toimisi paremmin. Väritykselliseksi ehkä aavistuksen verran olisin värittänyt hanskoja näkyvämmäksi. Nyt ne miltein hukkuvat joko toisiinsa tai miekan tuppeen värien tummuuden takia.
Asetelmallisesti voisi pienesti sakottaa hahmon asettamista kuvan keskelle. Koska taustassa ei tapahdu mitään muuta kuin savupilviä, niin hahmo olisi voinut olla sivummalla ja kaapu olisi voinut korvata osan taustasta. Tämä on vain maku kysymys ja osittain tykkään siitä, että miekka näyttää olevan täysin keskellä kuvaa. Niin kuin TSÄG! MUAHAHAHAA KUVA LEIKKAANTUU KAHTIA!

MUTTA! Pidän todella paljon siitä, että olet onnistunut tekemään eroavan tunnon kuvassa esiintyville materiaaleille. Liekit HOHKAA kuumuutta eikä vain ole punaista ja keltaista. Haarniska ei ole liian kiiltävä ja heijastaa hienosti tulen värejä. Hiukset, liikkuvat luontevan ja uskottavan oloisesti kuvassa luoden lisää dynamiikkaa hahmon suorittamaan iskuun. Ja tuo kangas... Voih~ Sopivasti rypytyksiä ja sen reunoilla olevat koristukset tekevät siitä muutakin kuin vain valkoisen kankaan (josta en tiedä oliko ne hahmolla valmiiksi vai onko ne piirtäjän lisäys). Ja punainen kangas myös liikkuu järkeenkäyvästi.
Muutenkin kuvasta löytyy hienoja yksityiskohtia joista ehdoton suosikkini on se, kun miekka on iskeytynyt maahan. TIHRUSTELKAA NYT MUUTKIN! Siellä kipinöi HELVETIN LIESKAT!

Kuva on upea idealtaan, mutta tunnelmaa hiukan syö omasta mielestäni mainitsemani virheet. Se ei kuitenkaan tarkoita, että virheet tekisivät kuvasta täysin surkean. Ja tekijä näyttää kuvassaan osaavansa muutakin kuin pelkän hahmojen piirtämisen. Vielä kerran. Uskottava tulen hehku on niin uskottava, että se HOHKAA kuumuutta! ^^
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CozmicTraveler Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gfsdfgg aivan upea, liekit ja pose ja kaikki! =D
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Unikeko Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thank you~ :3
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Chouko92 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student General Artist
QuQ oh my god she is so pretty and yet so strong!! I love this so much that i dont find any words. I was kinda suprised that you did this character cause some how i was sure that you wouldnt draw her.. Maybe it was that because i dont have properly picture of her xD

Thank you so much i will treasure this!! <3
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Unikeko Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
I'm glad you like it ;u; And shush now, never doubt your characters. I get inspirated from the weirdest things... And because of you I wanna design more armors hnnngh why so little of my characters wear armors kadsjgahldskgjhl
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Chouko92 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student General Artist
I love it! :'D Haha I doubt everything in this world!! And I'm happy to hear that this "inspired" you in some way, Armors are so hard for me too, and I don't know really what kind of details should I draw, but these armors inspired me alot!
Thank you :heart:
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Unikeko Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
A good idea for deisgning armor is first just googling normal armors and looking what hey looked like :3c Then, when you have general understanding of their working (how they're made that limbs can move, how much armor you want to put on your character - for example Laone's more aimed for speed, so she needs lighter armor), google fantasy armor and see what others have made! Then just design your own remembering that sexism is way too overrated. Rather try to keep in mind that the character would most likely rather have protector and (unless they're something like Phoenix) not want to charm the men in the battlefield.
Which reminds me... Does Laone know about her demonsidines? ;3
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Chouko92 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah, I have actually tried to understand how does armors work, but I'm so stupid that its hard for me to understand those. But soon I will get there! ;>
Thanks for the tips! My friend designs awesome armors so she also can help me, maybe. :3 But yeah it's just that Draw draw draw~ Laone has "a partner" but they fight separately. Laone is fast and I want her to be more like a strong cutie than a sexybabe~ 'cause Laone is like "only gurl in the battlefield 'cause girls shouldn't be in the military.

Actually yes she does, and she got those powers from her husband Uvall who was a full demon, but he died in Laones arms. Before he died he gave Laone a silver ring with a blue crystal, and when Laone put it on her left hands ring finger the crystal changed into a red. The ring had the demon powers what Uvall had left before he died.

:'S Sorry for the long post~
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Unikeko Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional General Artist
No, I'm sorry it took me so long to reply ;A; I've been like skljdhflkjdfgh.

But anyway yeah! Armors can be pretty tricky :'D But as long as you keep in mind what parts of the body need to move (knees, elbows, so on...) and what parts don't, it'll get easier - if you like BJD dolls, they give you good idea of it. :'D
World needs more fantasy women who are just women and not there for sex appeal u_u

Hoo cool 8> And don't worry I don't mind long posts XD It just takes me ages to answer since I'm lazyassss
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Ryuza Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGHHH

all i got to say
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Unikeko Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
XD Sounds legit.
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